Unit 26 assignment 2 feedback emman Explain that the MPAA is a trade association and what this means then explain how the Hollywood studio system works, using the audio track on my blog to help you.. Also you should maybe make your article a bit more appealing to the eye by adding more pictures of the films you discuss, especially on page 2/3, they are not really formatted like an article. You have copied and pasted a lot on page 2, you need to re write in your own words, and make sure that the film names you write about are in bold or italics. In your negatives you have used specific information you got from the documentary to discuss that the MPAA is accused of giving more support to studio productions than to independents and about how the MPPA and its members seem to be powerful studios or cinema chains, but try and add a paragraph summarising why this would be a bad thing for some film producers in Hollywood. Debate if you think that the MPAA serves the industry of EVERYONE in the film industry in Hollywood. Write a conclusion, what do you think about the MPAA, do you think the industry is right to work closely with them?
Unit 26 assignment 2 feedback emman
ReplyDeleteExplain that the MPAA is a trade association and what this means then explain how the Hollywood studio system works, using the audio track on my blog to help you.. Also you should maybe make your article a bit more appealing to the eye by adding more pictures of the films you discuss, especially on page 2/3, they are not really formatted like an article. You have copied and pasted a lot on page 2, you need to re write in your own words, and make sure that the film names you write about are in bold or italics. In your negatives you have used specific information you got from the documentary to discuss that the MPAA is accused of giving more support to studio productions than to independents and about how the MPPA and its members seem to be powerful studios or cinema chains, but try and add a paragraph summarising why this would be a bad thing for some film producers in Hollywood. Debate if you think that the MPAA serves the industry of EVERYONE in the film industry in Hollywood.
Write a conclusion, what do you think about the MPAA, do you think the industry is right to work closely with them?