You have used a wide range of research techniques. You need to summarize the information from your questionnaire, explaining what is better, primary or secondary research, and qualitative or quantitative data. You also need to make sure you have gotten the authors names and titles of all sources, along with years etc. A good idea would be to list them all at the end in a bibliography.
The treatment is detailed with good language and specific examples, but there could be more explanation of what your documentary will be like. There is the odd few punctuation and grammatical errors where you have not read it carefully enough.
You have used a wide range of research techniques. You need to summarize the information from your questionnaire, explaining what is better, primary or secondary research, and qualitative or quantitative data. You also need to make sure you have gotten the authors names and titles of all sources, along with years etc. A good idea would be to list them all at the end in a bibliography.
ReplyDeleteThe treatment is detailed with good language and specific examples, but there could be more explanation of what your documentary will be like. There is the odd few punctuation and grammatical errors where you have not read it carefully enough.